Wednesday 14 March 2018

My descriptive writing

This is my story where I am trying to use Hear - See - Feel in my writing to give the reader a picture in their head.
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  1. Tai4 May 2018 at 11:42

    Hi Troy my name is Tai from Panmure Bridge school up in Auckland. I am quite impressed on how you created your DLO about your descriptive writing. Nice work on drawing your pictures yourself instead of googling them up. Great work and keep it up!

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  2. joseph22 May 2018 at 10:33

    Greetings Troy my name is Joseph and i'm from Panmure Bridge School. I really like how you described your blurb of why you are going to use See, Hear, Feel. Your DLO is awesome and you should be proud of yourself for successfully making your DLO great.

    Keep up the great work!!!

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  3. Dallas22 May 2018 at 10:34

    Hi Troy i am quite impressed on how you created your DLO about your descriptive writing. nice work on drawing to your pictures yourself instead of googling them up. Great work keep your work up

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    1. Anonymous1 August 2018 at 09:49

      thanks Dallas for your comment hope we can be friends sometime

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  4. Anonymous7 November 2018 at 10:34

    Kia ora Troy, I read your work on descriptive writing. I really liked it and your drawings, they are really good. You were using really good punctuation and describing words in your story. If you want you can go to my blog copy this link http://karorolincons.blogspot.co.nz/

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Thanks for you positive, helpful comment on my work.

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