Tuesday 4 September 2018

My explanation writing

WALA: writing an explanation to tell people how things work.  I am explaning how an soundwaves travel from an explosion.

2 comments:

  1. Hi what an good explanation of your writing. This show you that you know about sound waves and putting a lot of powerful words in to your writing explanation like volcano they have big explosion and you can hear an far distance between where you live and far away. I have enjoyed reading your writing explanation about sound waves because it would be loud.

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  2. Greeting Troy,
    I am really amazed of how you explained how soundwaves worked. This was really interesting because i just learnt a new thing about sound waves. You also didn't copy and paste, which is something I can't imagine for someone who is younger than me. This was a great piece of work and had entertain me lot and persuaded me to learn more about shock waves.

    Good Work! :)

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Thanks for you positive, helpful comment on my work.