Tuesday 1 December 2020

my free choice writing 4

 Once there was a space explorer and he was busy flying throw space on his super cool space plane (have i said space enough?). Anyway he was flying around minding his own business when he hit an asteroid and got flung into a wormhole (because aparintle spaceships don't have brecks).he had been knocked out and when he woke up he realized he was on another planet and in the middle of an intergalactic alien war.there were two types of aliens there were strange purple mushrooms called the shroobs and huge lizards creatures called lizards and they were at war. soon the shroobs saw him and they stopped fighting and tried to capere him but the lizards stopped them and started firing lots of lasers and explosives so the shroobs retreated.the lizards took him back to their base and told him that the shrobs invaded their planet to take it over but space explorer didn't want that to happen so he got his ship and started shooting all of them down with lasers missiles and bombs but then the shroobs brot out an enormous dinosaur with huge spikes.the space explorer pressed a button and his ship turned into a robot and shot all it weapons lasers missiles and fire (hey is it just me or does this sound a lot like my free choice writing 1).anyway the dinosaur died the shroobs then tried to destroy it but the robot shot them all with a giant laser and they all got blown to smithereens then the space explorer whet back to earth and a the people at nasa decided not to that far out into space next time ok the end…..(wow i think this is my longest storey yet)

1 comment:

  1. Dear Troy,
    I think you have the recipe for narrative writing sussed. Yes I agree it is a long narrative. Next time I am anticipating a book!!
    Cheers Miss B

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Thanks for you positive, helpful comment on my work.